[gm9]

Much better, although personally I would prefer if you removed the boxes entirely, since I do not think that they are needed.

Some corrections:

* Remove the line from EL to LS.
* Add a line from Nek to LS.

Technically you would need to add lines from FP and Qeynos to TS and Nek as well (I am not sure whether you can still take the boat ride to the other zones from the cities, I think it was removed, right?).

And you forgot to set the ShadowStyle for the text "Butcherblock". Personally I would remove the Butcherblock text since you do not (and should not) list "Sinking Sands" on Ro either (or any of the other overland zones on Faydwer, or Rivervale, etc.).